Friday, November 28, 2014

NaNo 2014 Week 4 - Black Friday

Today's fiction is brought to you by Black Friday last year, as I'm NaNoing full rush to the end. For some reason this story gives me a dark pleasure with its cynicism (even though I took advantage and got my first ever pre-lit tree this year, for the bay window at the front of the house). But if you are a Black Friday lover, I grant you permission to hate me. Happy shopping! --Elm


Two dark cloaks stood above a milling throng, on a rather traditional cliff over dark, sticky fog.

None of the individuals saw our cloaks, or their true surroundings. In their minds, they huddled in coats, noses barely discernible beneath hats and scarves, puffs of shivering air escaping their lips as they waited for the alarm that signaled the start of the shopping melee.

"They've forgotten what they were thankful for just two hours ago," I chuckled, without mirth.

He raised a pale finger. The same pale finger that used to stroke my cheek. "Hush. It's not much longer."

I inclined my chin. "It's almost worth the cold."

His lips pulled back without a sound--I couldn't tell if he was laughing or snarling. The enigma characterized his profession perfectly. He'd walked the trail of the dead more fervently than I, allowed necromancy to shape his very bones. "What are you, alive?" he mocked.

I pulled back into my cloak. "Like you, I chose death long ago. But I'm getting distracted, like there's a glimmer I can't quite pick out from among them."

"Where?" he asked sharply, and I pointed downward to a particularly dark area at the edge of our cliff.

"Nothing glimmers there."

"Perhaps it's my excitement," I shrugged.

"Sometimes I don't believe you ever died."

"I don't believe it matters," I said mildly, as the alarm rang. The crush of holiday greed began. Like explosions of dandelion puffs, white wisps erupted from the surging darkness as the crowd stumbled forward.

I held out my hand and the wisps rose, blinked, shook, and responded to my gesture.

"Ah," I said softly, as a particularly bright one lit my palm. I gazed into its eyes, as though comparing myself beside it, as though it held something I wanted. With a sigh, I closed my fingers and tucked the soul into my breast pocket, close to my heart. Where there was no heart.

"Wistful, are you?" My companion's fingers pinched the tail of a wisp and stretched it thin between his hands, like taffy. A mosquito-like whine etched down my spine. I shook my head as it disappeared between his lips.

"This one was innocent. A child."

The grimace-that-might-be-a-smile spread again. "More power to you."

That might have been a joke. "I'm saving it for dessert."

A raspy noise came from his throat. Maybe even a laugh. "There is much to be thankful for... they began early this year. True love shows its black face."

"Like you know what love is," I said.

"I did once."

I measured him. Too many souls over the years? Were the last drops of honesty leeching out of him like blood?

"It's a thirst," he said.

I frowned. "Thirst signals a deficit of something necessary." In death, nothing was necessary.

"Things are necessary," he waved his hand at the crowd, catching another handful of tails. "Obviously."

"What things did you thirst for?" I kept my voice level.

This time I knew it was a grin. The grin I'd loved once upon a time. The grin I'd followed him into death for. It was not beautiful now.

"These," he held up his fist and crammed the souls to his mouth. "Freely discarded, freshly harvested power from the dead." 

A pang shuddered deep inside me. I'd known that. It's why I'd given up my heart when I died, so he could no longer have power over me.

What I hadn't seen, was that he'd never given up his.

I shrank back into my cloak and whispered silently to the bright soul in my pocket. "Let's you and I have a feast."

Friday, November 21, 2014

NaNo 2014 Week 3 - Alien Dragons


A random, alien dragon scene out of my sketchbook.

I discovered this site that's really helped me to structure my story this week, you should totally check it out: How-to-Write-a-Book-Now. You can never know enough about writing books and they have some GREAT helps.

Speaking of novel-writing:

Wordcount 23419

This week will be a wild ride to 50K :). Cheer me on. I, of course, am cheering you on whether you're NaNoing or not. All creativity is good creativity.

(You know, as long as it's used for good ends. But even if you're a villain or super-villain, you'll probably agree.)

Sometimes we all question our sanity, but remember, it's the actions that matter.

XO - Elm


Friday, November 14, 2014

NaNo 2014 Week 2 - On Things That Are Warm

See my new writing jewelry? A pretty 16 GB memory stick to keep my novel with me always. This baby is so little, it slides right into the usb port and warms up as my novel transfers onto it. Voila! Safe. I feel warm, too.

Wordcount 16599

Not quite 23K. But okay, I have to share my oh-so-warming news.

I have done five rewrites for this book. Rewrites, as in started from scratch with a year's worth of world-building every single time. Plus I took a NaNo to write part of the second book so I could clarify my main character. So I will tell you, the idea of starting over again was more than I could fathom. I really struggled with it.

But what are wonderful writing tools for? I'm using this year's NaNo to end this thing. And this week, I realized something that was pure sunlight to my soul.

This is not a rewrite, this is a revision.

I graduated! #singingdancinghallelujahs

This is 16599 words of a new beginning, new material through chapter eight, and some world-building that five years hasn't brought about. Do you know how much I love writing? (Yes, even with the love-hate thing.) It's the most heart-warming, satisfying thing on the planet. Worth putting in all that time and love and thought... or it will be.

Thanks for being warm with me :). Keep writing!

Friday, November 7, 2014

NaNo 2014 Week One

Week One down. Guess how many words?

7561.

Not to 10K yet. But since I can only count the fresh material on my rewrite, it's okay... I'm zoomin' through Chapter 5. Yes, that was a lot of new writing through the first four chapters. But I knew for forever that I'd have to redo the beginning... I swear the beginning is cursed, it's always the last thing done.

How is your beginning? I know, it's awesome. :D

On to Week Two! Remember: be fearless.